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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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.....This is going to be an AWESOME chapter.
I can also understand your intention. Rain wouldn't be the same story that so many people love if it was only about the drama of transitioning. Sure its a big part of it, but that isn't all that is going on. We are still people, so wehave perceptions on holidays, videogames, comics, movies, current events, just unable and chaotic episodes that leads no one to see what is going to happen. But at the same time can still be understood and believed given how the characters are written. So even if their is a chapter that doesn't have "how can you possibly do this?" we as the audience will understand that their is a time where we have to move away from that in order to really listen to the story.
As for what you said about the "true start" of the story, I can understand what you mean. If you look through popular titles such as Rorouni Kenshin and Death Note, after the first 3-4 chapters it becomes a different type of monster. At that point the players were introduced and their issues were set. After that its chaos theory. When situations happen and we are left to wonde how, given how they were introduced to us, will react. Its a common formula, but it makes me excited to see where you are going with this. And as far as I can tell, it even renews my love for the story in a way.
Congratulations on making it to this point, and glad to see you back. Hope it turns out the way you wish it too.
iamunknownlol <-- don't even try to understand it.
Seriously, though, this page offers a straightforward introduction. As the image is placed in the first person, it is almost as if the reader is being invited to the party (I accept, but I'm not going to be in costume for five weeks straight). It also draws out one of the minor characters, about whom we know practically nothing. A promising first page indeed!