Sometimes things are rough. Sometimes they’re just… not. Really. It happens.
Few notes: the clothing store “Eternal 18” is a play on “Forever 21”. To be perfectly forward about this, I’m not pleased with the parody this time around. Unfortunately, most clothing stores are just a person’s name, making it very difficult to come up with a clear parody.
Also, I prove once again that I’m not above a shameless cameo once in a while. The texting clerk is actually Carlie Hunter, one of the main characters from a more recent story concept known as Impure (the prologue of which should be posted soon). I’d considered using pretty much any of the main female cast from that story here, but I stuck with Carlie since she’s actually IN the prologue.
If you’re interested in Impure (just know that it’s VERY different than Rain), you can learn more here - [link]
Wow! That was easy. I don't think that I have ever been to a place where the door wasn't unlocked and I couldn't just walk in and out. But I feel that this might be the way that Rain is caught, it would be the "coming out of the dressing room" gag or something like that. I get the feeling that Rain will be exposed fairly soon though.
That DID actually cross my mind. Well, I was calling it "Pomegranate Democracy" but I was put off by the mouthful name. I like yours better. It at least shares the same amount of syllables with the actual store its parodying.
You can have that one, Lyn. Free of charge. ^_^
That DID actually cross my mind. Well, I was calling it "Pomegranate Democracy" but I was put off by the mouthful name. I like yours better. It at least shares the same amount of syllables with the actual store its parodying.
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Nalle means "Teddy bear".
In Denmark we can just walk in and out, lol.